Your story is well written, but, isn't plausible. A Minnesota police chief raping a girl from a small town? Nope, people will never believe it! People want to only think the best of their protectors. This feedback was provided by a judge at the Midwest Book Reviews.
|This photo was sent to me from a cafe in New Orleans. It was in the Louisiana edition of USA Today.|
I told ya so! Nooo, I couldn't say it . . . A Yale Reviewer peeked at my next story, 'Brand of Justice'. He had me write in a Hemmingway style. It was interesting. Beware, he said the story takes a shot. It really takes a shot. So there, stick your head in the sand and try really hard to pretend my stories can't HAPPEN!