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Ethel Rohan, author of ‘Out of Dublin’ on Curt Rude's writing. "Overall, great writing style. Reminds me of Rushdie: internal, emotionally complicated, and dualistic. Delivered with a sensitivity and awareness that is underrated. In one word his work is Awesome!"
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“Ma’am, my hands
really hurt. Officer Tracy … isn’t that your name?” McShuster asked.
“Handcuffs are
necessary when someone brings a gun to school.” Officer Tracy held her hand,
palm up, over the steering wheel. Then she leaned toward the passenger seat and
picked up the wallet she had taken off him. “James McShuster. Is that you?”
“Yes.” He nodded his
head, then lowered his voice. “Is that there Noah hurt? Did he get planted
harder than me?” He started to lean forward before pain jolted him in a
straight-up position.
“I don’t get,” Officer
Tracy said shaking her head. “Why … more shootings? Can’t even send kids to a
basketball game no more. Used to be unarmed people—men, women and children—were
off limits,” Officer Tracy mumbled.
McShuster spoke up. “Violence and guns is what it’s about. Shooters on a mission to go viral or something. Be badass and blast their way onto the news. The whole deal. Pictures with names … in the news, ruined parents. You know that? This stuff here tonight was planned for a bad ending. You know. It was like a secret mission. The same as they do in the army. I mean we had code words. We put together target practice. It got serious in short order. I mean homemade targets with names on them of dicks from school. It was funny until it wasn’t. We make the gun deal with our hand and pulled an imaginary trigger with our pointer finger. That meant target practice after school. I mean no harm no crime. Don’t get me wrong here. I ain’t sayin’ guns is right or wrong. I’m just saying—”
So here's what's happening. A suspect has been apprehended near a school. I can attest to this being how these calls go down. Nobody knows what's happening and the adrenaline is driving behavior. Then anger creeps in.
The Minneapolis/St Paul airport is something like six or seven miles from the last shooting I know of in America. When a shooting happens in your neck of the woods, it gets personal for sure. I was asked in Germany why we have so many shootings here. There seems to be a broad number of very insecure individuals who refuse to give up their beloved weapons. Why is this? I put together a story, 'People Shooter'. Its focus involves this issue. This is the first installment. I'd like to invite thoughts, opinions or comments.
People
Shooter
“Damn. Never seen
you guys coming,” McShuster said.
He tried to twist
his torso but couldn’t. The pain knocked the wind out of him. He’d been what
one of the cops called “planted” on the sidewalk, and his ears were ringing
from the gun blast. He wiggled his fingers handcuffed behind him. They hurt. He
imagined they were probably turning purple. His side was numb. “Not sure here.
I mean, who’s counting, but I feel like the entire cop nation landed on me out
there. Way I got it figured everything worked out good. Could’ve been a whole
lot worse, right?”
Officer Tracy was
in the driver’s seat. “Did you hear me read you your Miranda Warning? If so, I
suggest you remain silent.” She slid her hand down to check the strap on her
Glock. “What is this world coming to?” She checked the strap again. A lot of
officers develop nervous habits; checking her firearm was hers.
He looked out the
window at all kinds of people running to and from the school. It was mayhem.
Some were screaming. “Can you do something about my hands? They hurt. I won’t escape
on ya. I’ll answer
whatever you ask. Just loosen up my cuffs, please. I mean … Why I gotta have
these things on in the first place?”
The squad was
parked on the concourse in front of the school next to a flag pole. Its lights
were trained on a body lying on the ground. A man, not in uniform, was waving
at the approaching ambulance which jumped the curb and pulled up next to the
body. Two emergency technicians sprang from the ambulance. McShuster had to get
to work at Shorty’s Bar and Grill. He already had seventeen thousand in the
bank and he wanted to add to it. He glanced at his school. He already had half
his senior year over with.
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One of the reasons for these senseless acts is nobody thinks they could be next. I've never forgotten them kindergarteners. I smashed my weapon and it's buried in the landfill after Sandy Point. In a prior life I was a police officer and seen first hand why this country can't live with that Fourth ...
See moreYou wrote something with grammar like that. lol. By the way, wrong amendment as well.
Well, you get the point. People love their weapons no matter the human cost. But, really . . . Kindergarteners.
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I wished people would chill and study an issue before taking up a cause. As an author I am challenged with being objective and routinely consider an issue from a 360 perspective. As an author it was also gratifying seeing this photo. My book, Brand of Justice, in Time Square! Thanks Megan.
"Who being loved is poor?" Do those who flounder into an early demise feel unloved? Does life become a wasteland of values? Does The Last Gargoyle make sense? So many questions await answers.
Remarkable. Got to kinda hang with Oscar near Trinity College in Dublin. Referred to in Ireland as a hometown hero. Not so in life. He was denied the love he longed. Do you sometimes just stare at humanity and wonder why? "The Rainbow Allegiance" regards hatred that springs outta romantic same sex love. Click and Read
"I can resist everything except temptation."
Andrew Carnegie had it right all them years ago. He was into peace just before WW1 was launched. One picture. One reason why we have to strive for peace. Amen.
So many issues with so little time and a desire to make it right. Bad things like bullying, PTSD, gay bashing and sexual assaults seem to be an international phenomenon. As a cop in a former life I seen this stuff. It's for real and my writing reflects this basic premise. Next question please.
Watched football in the dead of the night. Europe is in its own time zone. Can anyone tell me why Verizon runs its commercial over and over again? A family confronts a father over his confusion on what cell plan to pickup.
Because you have a difference of opinion with someone does not mean you can't hear them out and respect them. For those who follow me, you know I do not believe in Hamas. This gentleman in Dublin, Ireland, was very passionate about his beliefs, because he seen what the British did to folks in Belfast. I don't think the two are that easily linked but there ya have it. It's okay to agree to disagree.
Got to hangout with Cork O'Connor. He got that nickname by-the-way because he never stays down. Many thanks for the support. My stories involve the real life side of things like how to commit the perfect murder . . . of which there are three in Brand of Justice. Ex-Cop here and I write like I mean it.
Surprised you had trouble downloading this yesterday. Let me know, if after you land, you have problems.
Hung out with returning soldiers and their families before this story was penned. War is one of the worse things to come out of humanity. Thanks for your service. Been notified and thanked for this effort. Very gratified you appreciated this story. This story is also available on Audible.
I guess its up-up and away to the land of Bavaria. What's next? My tomorrow never knows. May hear from me if I have any Airport time.
Judges Comments on 'The Passionate Jihadist' There are a lot of really engrossing, full details that drive the story along. The op...