I was 4 pages from the point I told you I thought I had the
ending figured out. I got two things right, the victim and the ******.
I guess that comes from
your style of writing and reading your first book.
Good story, good
characters, nice dialogue, a little hard to follow unless you can get into
western swing.
The music was a nice
touch, however I did not see where each song matched the mood of the chapter.
Maybe it was not my kind of music, but I did not feel they set the scene for
****** or ****** with a train.
The story is put together
well, but I did not get hooked on reading it cover to cover without stopping,
as I think I needed a little time to take it in and try an figure Who Done It.
Having your main character
go to cop school was a nice touch and it added drama to the plot. I like that
aspect of the story. I may have liked more storyline of the girlfriend. I
understand it was not about SEX, but I think a broader look at the love angle
would have added a little to ******. He could have reasoned that someday he
might have to protect her and his offspring from the court system, ******
righting wrongs.
I give you both thumbs up
and my two pinkies up too. So two big ones and 2 small ones for your efforts.
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